WEEK 4
24/02/26
I have a rough storyboard of sequences below.
next steps:
1.
Refine the plot
2. Write manuscript
3.Explore compositions for
each illustration I plan to make.
Storyboard:
26/02/24
FEEDBACK FROM PUCK:
I’ll spend the rest of the day puttting together a process book for tomorrow’s online feedback session with Nicholas.
Process :
Nicholas’ Feedback:
I also did a bit of sketching:
Observational drawings:
REFLECTION:
So the feedback sessions were really helpful. The story doesnt work as it is, so back to writing again. I was a bit dissapointed in myself because I let me anxiety get the better of me and I rushed into something because of my fears and also forgot to have fun! Next week, I begin again. I will need to study the hero’s journey fully, because mostly the structure and motivation doesnt work. I know, If I have fun with it, it will be fine.
On a nother note, I did a bit of observation drawing of children and it felt a bit creepy... I’m also worried that parents will become upset. Need to find another way to practice drawing children.
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